User:Hvkmbr0818/Kahun Gynaecological Papyrus/NorthGoose Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hvkmbr0818


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hvkmbr0818/Kahun_Gynaecological_Papyrus?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kahun Gynaecological Papyrus

Evaluate the drafted changes
Since you have added a section on contraception, I would also include contraception specifically in the Lead. Lead is concise, good. Tone, sources, and organization all look good. I would discuss how Column 3, Line 6 is misconstrued, or include a reference to a citation that does discuss this. Other than that this looks good.