User:Hw73171n/Individualistic culture/Fantasyreader22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hw73171n


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hw73171n/Individualistic_culture?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Individualistic culture

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hw73171n is still in the process of creating a bibliography and sandbox draft. However, I can still provide some feedback and tips for the future. The individualistic culture article itself is not that long, so I would definitely consider researching the topics already on there and expanding on the items further. I'd suggest mentioning the names and sources of where you got the information within the article because the current article only does that a few times. It may be helpful to the reader if the source is more explicitly stated and explained. When you make your bibliography, I'd suggest starting in google scholar, and if you're unable to access it, try typing the name into Pace's library. That worked for me most of the time when I couldn't access a source that I really wanted through google scholar. Overall, good luck on getting started!