User:Hw9724wx/Environmental analysis/Lazypossum Peer Review

General info
Hw9724wx
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Hw9724wx/Environmental analysis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Environmental analysis

Evaluate the drafted changes
It looks great! I love the way you organized the information, and everything is in a clear and concise manner that can be understood by just about anyone. My only thing is that the tense can be a little funky here and there, such as "Recent advances in remote sensing field has also led to the development of autonomous devices for the analysis of physicochemical parameters of the environment using sensors." this sentence my read better with either chancing has to have, or "Recent advances in the remote sensing field have led to the development of autonomous devices for the analysis of physicochemical parameters of the environment using sensors." Some of the sentences have extra words that may allow the sentence to flow better without. Your information is clear and great though, and it would still be an amazing update if you change nothing :)