User:Hwubb/Tabby cat/Gemjk19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hwubb


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hwubb/Tabby_cat?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tabby cat

Evaluate the drafted changes
It looks like from what I can tell you added the bold portion of the article sentences. I think the sentences read nicely, are in good order, and are easy to understand. Also good source. However the statement "the coat of a cat is very important" sounds a bit out of place or opinion-like. Perhaps you only need to word it differently or add to it like "the coat of a cat can be important" or "to some people, the coat of a cat can be important". Other than that, looks great so far. (sorry I added this in the talk page too wasn't sure where to put it)~