User:Hwubb/Tabby cat/Isabelletackmann Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hwubb


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hwubb/Tabby_cat?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tabby cat

Evaluate the drafted changes
User provides useful information that is unbiased. Some improvements that can be made are to elaborate a bit more to help reader understand information to the fullest extent and leave them with no questions. Additionally, fixing the few grammatical errors and adding more headings would help the flow of the article.