User:HyeyoungKimuw/Yeongsanjae/Meganshw Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

HyeyoungKimuw


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:HyeyoungKimuw/Yeongsanjae
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Yeongsanjae

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall the information added are all important content for the topic and well-introduced the topic. I do feel like there can be more for the lead for reader to have more understand of what the topic is about and also some introduction to the content below. For the content, maybe expanding the history part or the process of the ceremony can help readers learn more about the topic. Also consider adding images for the difference dances in the ceremony and the whole ceremony. Since it is a very important part of Korea religion culture, another part that can be added is the reason why it is so important especially for Korean. There can be more elaboration on the content but I can see great progress.