User:Hylaversicolor/Copper/Shrekinspector Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hylaversicolor


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hylaversicolor/Copper?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Copper

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great additions so far, definitely a lacking but much needed subsection in the article. My biggest thing would be I'm unsure if your intended additions are enough for the course requirements (Not sure how much we are supposed to add though) to be sure of this though I would suggest expanding on the history section in general, beyond the intended NA edits; I'm sure more info could be found on this in general.

Your additions are very clear, neutral and concise, well written. Your Copper Age section additions feel somewhat rushed in pacing, though I know this is a draft so as long as you expand on this more for the final product you should be fine. Your additions are good as they help to balance out the article, North American history was lacking previously, so this will give it better coverage. Your added citations are all good and reputable, I do notice some areas where you don't have citations yet, so just be sure you do for the final product.

I would avoid the whole section you discuss adding about the ice sheet. Like you say this is all speculation and this is not really the goal of Wikipedia. Perhaps if you have sources on this then yes, but at the moment it sounds as if you don't.

Be sure to add a summary of your intended changes of the history section and why you intend to make them to the talk page of the article too.