User:IAMNOTJESUSJR/Spencerian script/LHpedia Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

IAMNOTJESUSJR


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:IAMNOTJESUSJR/Spencerian_script?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Spencerian script

Evaluate the drafted changes
Looking at the current article (before looking at the draft), the amount of information is full but not filled. If available and credible, more information could be added. Once looking at the article draft, I was pleased to see a large chunk of information in the draft that was written well and that seemed to be publish-ready. Three headings had information added to in the draft, each heading given ample sentences with useful information for the article. In the info drafted, links to other pages were available when necessary, which will be great for those looking for further info.

Five reference sources were listed in the draft, all seeming to be credible. If these links are not already apart of the current article and if they are all credible, these would be great additions to the articles reference list.

Overall, I believe this user did great work with gathering new information that is valuable to add to the article. Plenty of information was found with sentences drafted in a way that is without bias. I believe this user's draft work can be a great addition to it's article.