User:ICapt.NemoI/Monkeypox virus/Egross123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ICapt.NemoI, Jap23630, Solis.eve


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:

- Intro has appropriate links embedded into content to help readers understand what content is being described.

- I feel like the intro speaks more on the monkeypox infection rather than the monkeypox virus itself. Speaking to characteristics of the virus itself in the intro might be a more appropriate approach.

Content:

- The whole article seems to speak on the monkeypox infection in humans rather than characteristics of the virus. Writing about the way to virus obtains energy, how it moves, what conditions does it prefer, etc. might help the article be more focused on the appropriate topic.

- There could definitely be sections detailing the infection in humans but I think finding more information on the virus itself will help the develop the article.

Tone/Balance:

- I didn't notice any tone or off balance opinions, so keep that up when editing your article! I felt like the article contained information and not opinion, which is great.

Sources/References:

- Not every sentence had a reference and the reference list seemed a little short. Once you find more information on the viruses characteristics I'm sure the reference list will grow.

- Just ensure each sentence is appropriately cited.

Organization:

- Extending the content list/adding more headings will make the article more well-rounded and developed. Otherwise, the article had an appealing display and seemed pretty well-organized.

Images/Media:

- I noticed a few images and a map which makes the article more appealing and engaging.

- Adding more pictures to display the viruses characteristics will help the article be more informative.