User:ICapt.NemoI/Monkeypox virus/Meghanherlitzka Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Solis.eve, Jap23630, ICapt.NemoI


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Monkeypox virus


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:

The lead appears to be updated but needs some more information that relates to later sections of the article, specifically regarding the "epidemiology" section. A brief description of this section would make the article stronger and more coherent. The lead is not overly detailed and gets to the main points concerning the Monkeypox virus. If more information is added to the content, the lead will need to be updated, as well.

Content:

The content does not cover all necessary sections in my opinion, and more information could be added to the current sections. The "Variants and clades" section, the "Virology" section both likely have more data that could be included to make for a stronger depiction of Monkeypox. The content does not seem to be up to date, as much of the information was from before the year 2000.

Tone/Balance:

The content appears to be neutral without any heavily biased claims to my knowledge. The content does not persuade the reader, but more content could be added to better inform the reader.

Sources/References:

There are a lot of reliable sources cited at the end of the article, which goes to show it is a well established and researched article. All the links work to my knowledge. The sources, however, are not current but do seem to have reputable authors. Adding more current references would strengthen the article, especially with all the new studies on the Monkeypox virus recently.

Organization:

Some of the content could be rewritten to be more clear. Overall, the content is organized.

Images/Media:

More images should be added if they exist. It would strengthen the article and description of Monkeypox.