User:IDIC-Linguist/Sofia Ongele/RedCellar Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted chang

 * Just a spelling thing: “Her first app was create at age 17” should have a “d” after create.


 * This looks like a very good framework that can be positioned and written into a well-worded wikipedia biography.


 * A possible example of headings and subheadings that this information can be coded under could be LEAD, EXPERIENCE education, coding, CAREER, Gen Z for change, (Tiktok or Social Media).


 * I think that the re-dawn paragraph and the TikTok paragraph are very well written.


 * “Activist” and “columbia university” could have a link attached to them.