User:IDIC-Linguist/Sofia Ongele/Shena Murphy Peer Review

General info
IDIC-Linguist (Scribepedia, Gizelleg25)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:IDIC-Linguist/Sofia_Ongele?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Sofia Ongele

Evaluate the drafted changes
There are a few sporadic spelling mistakes (no biggie), and the lead is usually an indented paragraph that detail birthdate and birthplace, areas of study or achievement, and death if applicable - which is not in this case! So if you wanted to change the setup of the lead you could - but bullet points are sometimes easier to read through than paragraphs - your discretion though!

It looks like a couple of your references are not peer-reviewed journals/academic papers or articles, but I saw at least one news article and it looks good! I'd steer closer to thee academic side of things, but considering Ongele's occupation and the fact that she speaks about her app designed to help people, it makes sense!

Overall, I think your page looks good, and your person is interesting so I liked reading through the content!

Good luck with your finals + hags :)