User:ILBO7water/Jung Kang-ja/Af4718 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(ILBO7water- Jung Kang-ja)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ILBO7water/Jung_Kang-ja?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I got an informative description of Jung Kang-ja in the Lead paragraph and the Article Body. The Lead provides a good introduction to what follows in the article. The tone of the article is neutral; it is neither in support or against the artist's work. However, I am interested in learning more. I would suggest adding these key details, if found: the city/ village that the artist was born in and brief descriptions of the Korean avante-garde scene. Add more about Hongik University, Fourth Group, Shinjeon Group and Young Artist's Union. If not in the body paragraphs, you can attach hyperlinks. I am wondering whether the Lead and Biography are the only sections you are working on? Be sure to include captioned images on the artist's work. You provided many reliable sources, in Chicago style.