User:IRiptide/Ivory/20carnesa Peer Review

General info
IRiptide
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Ivory
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is already a lot of good information in your article so i like where you were going fixing formatting issues, that a good place to start. Just keep adding relevant information and you will be good to go.