User:IRiptide/Ivory/Pgress Peer Review

General info
(provide username)IRiptide
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Ivory
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ivory
 * Ivory

Evaluate the drafted changes
The page of ivory is up to date. The person adding to it kept the article very unbiased and up to date and very straight forward. I didn't notice any oddities and the work was very positive and it was updated and I learnt something new reading through the article. The links and citations all work and are non plagiarized. I think every topic was hit and it's a well written page.