User:ISUWIKI/Aquifex pyrophilus/TVenvisci Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ISUWIKI


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:ISUWIKI/Aquifex pyrophilus
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Aquifex pyrophilus

Lead
Guiding questions:

- The lead has been updated but I think it could stand to more broadly cover the topics that they are adding to the article.

- The first sentence introduces the topic well.

- The lead does not contain a sentence covering the topics of the article.

- The lead does not contain information not later on covered.

- It is very concise.

Content
Guiding questions:

- The content added is relevant to the subject, yet some more recent references should be used.

- It seems more sections will be added, the ones that have been are useful.

- The article does not yet address one of Wiki's equity gaps.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:

- The content is neutral and do not seem biased or persuasive.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:

- The sources seem reliable, yet out of date.

- There are several pieces in the Metabolism and Habitat and Genome, Phylogeny, and Lineage sections that are not cited (although there are lots of links).

Organization
Guiding questions:

- It is written succinctly and is well organized, seems to have proper grammar throughout.