User:Iadaniel/Sustainable packaging/Josh VdR Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Greengal.02, Mflloyd, Iadaniel


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Iadaniel/Sustainable packaging


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sustainable packaging

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead is concise. The content being drafted is related to the main article. Perhaps the article could add a section getting more into waste details because that is the where all packaging materials ends up and is probably one of the most important parts of packaging life cycle. The content added is neutral. The sources seem to be reliable secondary sources which are properly cited in the draft. The content added is clear and concise and easy to understand. The "additions to intro section" portion does seem to mainly talk about alternatives, so maybe that could just be put into the alternatives section and not the intro. No additional images were added; might be something useful to add.