User:Iadaniel/Sustainable packaging/Lupineflower Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Iadaniel


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Iadaniel/Sustainable_packaging?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sustainable packaging

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall I think that this is a great addition to the article. There is a lot of good information being added as well as specific bills, and they seem to be explained very well. I would maybe just be careful with biases, but from what I can tell it seems neutral which is good! I do think that it would be interesting to add information on how maybe oil companies or just how big plastic companies have gotten in the way... maybe like who they back in the legislative brach that is making it hard to pass such bills. But also I do know that could also be controversial. Overall i think that the information that has been added, adds good value to the article and with just a little more expanding on these topics I think it will be great!

Keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing how this article turns out!