User:Iadmc/(factsheet) Murder of Denise Amber Lee

Basic facts and article issues

 * Denise Amber Lee was murdered by Michael King on January 17, 2008; the crime followed his kidnapping and raping  her earlier in the day.
 * Correct and easily sourced
 * Lee and several others had attempted to call for help through the 9-1-1 system but there was a lack of communication and the police and other emergency services arrived too late.
 * Correct and easily sourced but needs clarification (how was there a lack of communication?)
 * At least four 911 calls were made, one by Lee herself from her abductor's phone and one from a witness, Jane Kowalski, the latter giving a detailed account of events as they unfolded before her.
 * Actually five by five different callers including the victim. ✅ in lead; ❌ in other sections (see below)
 * Particulars of the crime (see the subpages /The crime and /The Crime (Basic English rewrite)
 * Essentially correct but text needs a massive rewrite so it does not look like a witness statement but is rather an encyclopedic account of events
 * Particulars of the trial (see the subpage /The trial)
 * Ditto Particulars of the crime
 * The aftermath and parallel developments (see the subpage /The aftermath)
 * The facts need to be massively expansed upon: enormous amounts of work have been done both by the family and the authorities to address the various failings, In particular:
 * Denise Amber Lee Act and potential further FL State Law
 * Former is voluntary; latter would seek to make certification and training mandatory for all 9-1-1 call takers and dispatchers in FL
 * New section needed to discuss these developments
 * Denise Amber Lee Foundation
 * Clear but needs minor copyediting and rewording
 * Sponsorship of same by Gulf Coast Community Foundation of Venice
 * Needs adding and citing as an important fact
 * Parallel developments in other countries/states etc
 * Need looking into and adding if relevent. Eg, there was a similar situation in Australia recently
 * Denise Amber Lee bio
 * Nathaniel Alan Lee (but probably stick with Nathan Lee for now). ✅ Rest needs minor expansion but fine for now
 * Photograph of Lee
 * In hand (need clarification of copyright procedures)
 * Michael King bio
 * Expand if possible
 * Photograph of King
 * Only to be added if Lee's photo is added and only then if deemed appropriate
 * Tags
 * OR tag was possibly correct at time of placement but made inaccurate now by the many new refs and ELs ✅ refactored tag to include only cleanup
 * Cleanup is in hand
 * Orphaned article
 * Need to find other articles to link to this article
 * Possibilities include: articles on similar crimes, articles on similarly mishandled crimes, articles on similar bills, articles on authorities discussing similar situations and bills etc

Links for above
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Further useful links

 * Pain turns into action John Davis; Herald Tribune; September 26, 2008
 * 9-1-1 bill passes through first House committee NBC-2 Online; February 16, 2010
 * Husband Pushes for Tougher 911 Dispatcher Training Len Kiese, Taren Reed; First Coast News; February 18, 2010
 * Woman's murder prompts 9-1-1 reform bill 10 Connects
 * Florida House of Representatives (watch for updates)
 * Bill being pushed will raise standards for 911 call takers ABC 27
 * Mother of 2 Believed Abducted From Florida Home Fox News; January 18 2008
 * Denise Amber Lee Slaying HeraldTribune (unknown date/author)
 * More training for North Port 911 center John Davis; February 17 2010; HeraldTribune Note - crucial explains how an unrelated case helped push for further training etc
 * Denise Lee Murder useful timeline of basic events (not for article though, I suspect)
 * Juror13 useful personal site to help discover more facts to verify