User:Ian.c.witter/ʻĀhihi-Kīnaʻu Natural Area Reserve/L.schlieman Peer Review

Adding the purpose of the reserve was informative but I think there needs to be more sources. I'm not familiar with the literature on the subject but the DLNR sources look like they are out of date (2010).

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