User:IanKreciglowa/Spitting cobra/Emeraldh01 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

IanKreciglowa


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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Spitting cobra

Evaluate the drafted changes
This was a really interesting topic, it was really cool to learn! I would definitely add some more photos, I think some photos of the snake would really draw attention to the article! I think it would also be interesting to add some background on the cobras if you wanted, such as what their environment is like and reasons when/why they would use their venom as a defense mechanism! It would be some great background knowledge. I would try and add more citations into the article if you can too. I really like the adding of statistical data, like how you mentioned "...accounting for 67-73% and 22-30% of the total venom proteins." I think that is super interesting and great to have in an article like this! This is a really interesting topic!