User:IanWilliams25/Controversies in autism/CleanBean Peer Review

General info
IanWilliams25
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:IanWilliams25/Controversies_in_autism?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Controversies in autism

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey Ian! Good job getting right to the point. Your use of "assumption" in the first sentence doesn't really project a neutral stance. It seems directed towards one way over the other. Maybe review, the sentence structure or use another that is neutral and relates the statement.