User:IanWilliams25/Controversies in autism/Mgjones2 Peer Review

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IanWilliams25
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User: IanWilliams25/Controversies in autism
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Controversies in autism

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello Ian. I found you contribution helpful as it pertains to the topic assigned in a neutral fashion. Your edit could be further improved by providing a more comprehensive overview of existing research and studies on the topic. Particularly the "specific behaviors" and "genetic disorders" that can lead to a diagnoses of autism. I look forward to reading your findings.