User:IanWilliams25/Controversies in autism/Mrs.Egyptian Peer Review

General info
IanWilliams25
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:IanWilliams25/Controversies in autism - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Controversies in autism - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Just from what I can see there are currently no pictures present. I do see that pictures (charts) were added on the main article. The layout of the article seems to be coming along. So far, I see that one source has been used. I do know that we have to have at least two, so watching out for that would be helpful. Try to expound more on the topic of controversies in autism and build from there. All in all, this article still needs much improvement. I do believe the introduction of the article could go more into depth on the topic of what autism is.