User:IanWilliams25/Controversies in autism/Uiseon1012 Peer Review

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IanWilliams25
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:IanWilliams25/Controversies_in_autism?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Controversies in autism:

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Hi, Ian. I enjoyed reading your statement. Your statement is concise and neutral tone. Personally, the discussion about the "genetic factors" should be in the category of "genetics." It is more likely to describe the causation of ASD in a biological system. Other than that, it was easy to read and understandable thoughts.