User:Iander2/Nine Spaces Nine Trees/LisaR2018 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Iander2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Iander2/Nine Spaces Nine Trees
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nine Spaces Nine Trees

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section of this article is good. It is a good summary of the subject and includes information that is not mentioned elsewhere in the article.

The content of this article is also good, but quite short. More information could be added in the materials/construction project section if possible. The tone of this article is neutral.

Sources in this article are good and relevant. Not every sentence in the article has a citation where it is needed.

This article is well-organized and easy to follow.

Overall, good job! The content added gives more information on the subject and is well organized and easy to follow. I would recommend citing every sentence that includes new information and adding more content, if possible, particularly under the materials/construction section.