User:Iander2/Nine Spaces Nine Trees/Mollyanders Peer Review

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Questions for a New Article Peer review:

Does this article meet wikipedia Notability requirements:

Yes! it is a relevant and interesting topic that is supported by more than 2 reliable secondary sources.

How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it represent all available literature of the subject:

Definitely not ALL literature associated with this topic but it is a really good start! Especially because they started from scratch.

Does this article follow the patterns of other similar article:

Yes! Each section of this article is well thought out and well informed.

Does this article link to other articles so it is more discoverable:

Yes! It links to a lot of other things including the instillations artist and the University of Washington where it is located.

Great Job starting this article!

Some suggestions I have..

-It might be beneficial and interesting to further explain the irrigation system you talked about. What was the plan? What was it like before? How is it different from the current system?

-Your Robert Irwin tab is blank. It might be helpful to write an “ABOUT THE AUTHOR” section. Why was he the selected artist? What else has he created?

-Explain the current state of the instillation: What does it look like now? Has it changed in anyway? Is it even still there?

-Citation needed after “In 1983, Robert Irwin's art installation, 9 spaces 9 trees, was originally meant to be placed on the rooftop plaza of the City of Seattle's Public Safety Building but reconstruction on the building forced the art installation to be permanently removed.”

Overall, it was an awesome article! Great work!

Mollyanders (talk) 22:15, 24 January 2023 (UTC)