User:Iansnts/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Article Title
Betis Church

Article Evaluation

 * Lead Section

The lead section is a clear, concise, and brief overview about Betis Church.


 * Content

The article's content is up to date and is relevant to the topic. Content is broken down into specific features and pieces of history relating to the church.


 * Tone and Balance

The article is neutral, although the architectural design process as well as the construction process is underrepresented.


 * Sources and References

Sources are reliable and somewhat relevant, although there is one notable source that is missing from the references.


 * Organization and Writing Quality

The article is very organized, concise, and clear, broken down into section that reflect the major points of the topic.


 * Images and Media

The article includes images that enhance the understanding of the topic in a very organized and clear manner.


 * Talk Page Discussion

Rated start-class, low to mid importance, the page discusses external links and proper citations


 * Overall Impressions

The article feels relatively complete. The article needs an improvement in architectural design process and construction design process.

Article Title
Kinkaku-ji

Article Evaluation

 * Lead Section

The lead section is fairly brief but concise and clear, bringing up its cultural and national importance to Japan.


 * Content

The article's content is relevant, current, and covers plenty of the most important points in the topic.


 * Tone and Balance

the article is neutral in tone and has a great balance between different important points in the topic.


 * Sources and References

Sources are reliable, relevant and current, however, there are still primary and secondary sources that can still be used.


 * Organization and Writing Quality

The article is very organized, concise, and clear, broken down into section that reflect the major points of the topic.


 * Images and Media

The article includes images that enhance the understanding of the topic in a very organized and clear manner.


 * Talk Page Discussion

Listed as a level 4 vital article in art and is rated start-class and high importance


 * Overall Impressions

The article is detailed and well developed. There is clear organization and a wealth of relevant knowledge.

Article Title
Kyoto Imperial Palace

Article Evaluation

 * Lead Section

The lead section is a clear and concise overview of important facts about the palace.


 * Content

The article's content is relevant and up to date, with only a few missing pieces.


 * Tone and Balance

A very neutral and formal tone with a good balance between historical facts and structural facts and design processes.


 * Sources and References

Sources and references are mixed with half being out of date and half relevant and up to date. There is definitely room for improvement in adding more sources, references, and citations


 * Organization and Writing Quality

Organization is categorized very well into main points and the writing quality is formal and there are no grammatical errors.


 * Images and Media

Images are laid out in a visually appealing way with good captions and an enhanced understanding of the topic.


 * Talk Page Discussion

Rated C-class, high importance. The talk page consists of recommendations and potential relevant references and sources that could be useful for some future version of the article.


 * Overall Impressions

The article is very well written with thorough knowledge on the subject matter, however the fact that there is still room for improvement is very promising.