User:Ibaker5/Hadrian's Villa/ClaireMarieR Peer Review

Content

The content of this article is relevant to the Wikipedia page of ‘Hadrian’s Villa,’ which would fit in nicely with the article and is presented clearly. The content is up to date, and the sources provide an excellent range from 1984-2010. This fills in the gaps in the article and fits very nicely. I would love to learn more about some of the information added, such as (the named rooms of the villa).

Tone and Balance

The article's tone is appropriate for Wikipedia and does not favor one side or the other, giving clear and neutral information. This was done very well and remains appropriate throughout the text. The viewpoints are presented equally and provide information from multiple different scholarly sources. And it also is not trying to persuade the reader of any point but is purely fact-based.

Sources and References

Most pieces of information are backed up with a citation and are supported, and various citations are shown. The article uses the sources efficiently and cites them in the bibliography. The sources are thorough and give viewpoints from multiple scholars and years. The references are also reliable. Something I would change is the citation of sources by linking them below, to create more clarity for the reader.

Organization, Images and Media

The organization of the text is structured well. It presents clarity and gives detailed information that is easy to follow. Some minor edits could be made, such as: a citation missing in the first line, to ensure clarity and that the text is presented thoroughly.

Overall Impressions

How can content added be improved?

Some minor improvements, such as simple spelling mistakes (an oval shape), can be made. And I think adding a more current and modern source would be a valuable addition to this article.

What are the strengths of the content added?

A minor adjustment I would recommend is having citations listed in the references below. As well as that, there are some small punctuation errors, such as: full stops after: (the villa (MacDonald 7)) and (interest in the Villa (De Franceschini, 25)). I would also love to read some more about the (named rooms of the villa).