User:Ibell3772/Preah Khan Kompong Svay/Bilsonian Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ibell3772, Tsholmquist


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ibell3772/Preah_Khan_Kompong_Svay?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Preah Khan Kompong Svay

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

I can see that you guys are communicating in the article which is good, but I think there should be a little more info on overview of the article and what the subsections are and whatnot.

Content

The new addition of the iron production occurring at the site is good, there is plenty of new additions there. The content is mostly up to date, except for the 1939 one but that one is good for context. I think if you can find some slightly newer sources, like from after 2010, it would benefit the article.

Tone and Balance

The tone is neutral, good job on that. Nothing to really add here.

Sources and References

As I said in the content part, you guys have good sources but I would recommend having a source from after 2010.

Organization

I'm not familiar with the site but if its possible I think it would benefit you to add sections based on the time periods of the site. The organization by what's important, with the iron production heading and stuff, is still useful however.

Images and Media

I can't really tell, but I think there aren't any pictures. I think you guys removed the pictures?