User:Icecreamsandwichlove/Ca d'Oro Building/AveryScott6 Peer Review

General info
Icecreamsandwichlove
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Icecreamsandwichlove/Ca d'Oro Building
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ca d'Oro Building:

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think it might be helpful to include some of the information from the existing version of the article to cover some of the very basics of the topic (i.e. where and what the building is, etc.). For some of the detailed history you added, I think dates would be helpful to give a more solid sense of chronology; if exact dates are not available, even markers such as "by 1940 it had become a mix-use property with..." would make the article more informative. '

I also think that more information on the building's usage throughout history would be helpful. You mention that it has shops on the first floor, but has this always been the case? Have the types of shops changed (I imagine they have)? I found myself wondering "what is this building exactly?" while reading your draft, so providing a bit more history about the way the building has been used could clarify that question. Perhaps even a "Today" section to hold information, perhaps in more detail, about the building's present use would be good.

The section on the influence of Venetian architecture could also be expanded a bit to include more information about the specifics of these architectural styles and influences. In fact, more architectural detail overall would be great. A small but trivial detail--I would probably not title this section "Italian Revival Architecture," unless this is an understood scholarly term, because for large parts of Venice's history the concept of a single and unified Italy was nonexistent.