User:Icela01/Abbie Howard Hunt Stuart/Citlalli728 Peer Review

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User:Icela01


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Hey Icela, Nice work! Your additions were very clear and easy to follow along and also remains neutral. You used a reliable source and have a pretty large length of sources which is nice. My only suggestion is there is a slight grammar issue where you typed “She was married to Robert Stuart which later on she moved to Olympia with him.” This is the only sentence I found that sounded awkward. That is my only suggestion but overall, really nice work!