User:Icelover95/Alpine lake/Herweckk Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hsufu, NobodyXVIII, Meagan.OSU, Heathadr


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Heathadr/Anchialine_pool?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Anchialine pool

Evaluate the drafted changes
The first sentence seems to have an unnecessary 'An' as the first word, which I think should just start with the words 'Anchialine systems'. The 'Geology' and 'Organism Identification' sections have a different citation format to the rest of the article, so the citations should be updated to be consistent. The 'Chemistry' section has a misspelling of the word 'pycnocline' in the second paragraph, and it might be useful to link it to the pycnocline Wikipedia page as well. It might also be nice to link to the redox Wikipedia page. The 'Anchialine Ponds' under the 'Ecology' section seems to be unfinished, as the second half looks like a list of bullet points rather than complete paragraphs.

Overall there is a large amount of interesting information and I can tell a lot of research went into finding information and sources. There are some grammatical mistakes, so it might be useful to carefully read over each section to look out for spelling errors/typos/etc. I like the images that are currently included, but maybe a few more could be added towards the top of the page in the geology or ecology section. I'm also unsure why some sections have sentences underlined.

The current form is a strong draft, and I enjoyed reading/learning about this new-to-me topic! With a bit of revision this will be a great source of information on alchialine systems.