User:Icelover95/Alpine lake/Vmoreno11 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Icelover95


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Icelover95/Alpine_lake?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Alpine lake

Evaluate the drafted changes
Please find my review below:

Wow, there is so much content you have added to this page! The paragraphs you all have here read very well, and are clearly well-founded in the literature (lots of informative data given). It is clear that there are still a couple of sections that you all are still hashing out, which look good so far in terms of the topics you've proposed to cover. I also really like the use of figures here - having a good mix of photo examples along with a conceptual diagram of the formation of these lakes is a plus. I do think it might help for ease of navigating to reorder the ecology subsections so that the invertebrate and vertebrate community structures follow one another, and maybe putting the climate change section at the end so that you set the framework for the current ecological conditions in the sections above and end with how they will be affected by climate change at the end.

I also think reframing the "past and future climate" section to something like "indicators of past and future climate" might be helpful; as the section title is currently written, a quick glance over it reads to me like you will be covering the specific climatic conditions under which these lakes form, which does not seem like the actual goal of this section.

It is a really minute detail, but I personally feel that the heading sizes should be evaluated before publishing. Some sections (like formation and mixing regime) feel like they should be made larger. Also, I took a look at the current Alpine Lakes page and saw it's mostly just a list of major alpine lakes around the world. If you are going to remove the list from this page, maybe you can suggest the list be made into a separate page "List of alpine lakes" that you can link to at the bottom of yours?

Great work so far. I am really looking forward to seeing where this goes! Vmoreno11 (talk) 08:02, 17 November 2022 (UTC)