User:IconRomano/Wilderness Act/Robinangelawilkins Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(IconRomano)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:IconRomano/Wilderness_Act?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Wilderness Act

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall I think you did a really good job editing the page. Adding the legislative history and condensing the summary really helps improve the page's readability.

I think it would be a good idea to keep or refine the Criticism subsection if you are able to find more sources that expand on opposition and the public's attitude towards the act.