User:Ics0621/Paget's disease of the breast/Sweetiepie9192 Peer Review

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Ics0621
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Ics0621/Paget's disease of the breast
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Paget's disease of the breast

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Sweetiepie9192's Peer Review Notes


 * The first sentence seems a bit too long. I would say you should consider breaking it into two parts.
 * The whole article is very relevant to the topic of the article. There were barely any distractors, which helped me concentrate on the article's topic.
 * For the most part, the article is neutral - the author’s opinions are not known.
 * I like that you automatically linked words that might require extra searching. It would help readers who are not so familiar with the topic.
 * Finally, the photos and illustrations are good - they are not too convoluted. It has the appropriate sections - from signs and symptoms to pathology to epidemiology. I suggest that you look to see what the disease looks like in other skin tones if you have access and then add it on there.
 * I noticed that citation #3 is difficult to find. I can also see that you are still working on the rest of references, so once those are up to date, I have nothing else to add! Great job!