User:Idabelda/Ecofeminism/Elksforest Peer Review

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Hello Gennavie! Your additions will fit nicely into the article and add some much needed citations. I think that putting the "Further Reading" before "References" would be a great touch and make the article flow better.

As you have pointed out, the citation and references are lacking a little bit. Here are some of my suggestions:


 * In the section "Major critiques", there is a citation needed to back up the claim, "However the criticism was based on a category mistake made by those who missed the emerging political critique of patriarchal ideology." and " In Europe and the global South, class, race, gender and species dominations were framed by more grounded materialist understandings." I would suggest doing further research to find scholarly sources to back these claims.
 * In the sub section "Major critiques" labeled "Intersectionality" there is a citation needed for "To some, the inclusion of non-human animals also came to be viewed as essentialist." I would suggest doing further research to find scholarly sources to back these clams.
 * The major source for Vanessa Lembruber's book Guia ecofeminista: mulheres, direito, ecologia is an amazon link. I urge to find a scholarly sources for the book in addition to fixing her instagram link.
 * In the section "Theorists", the same section Vanessa Lembruber is in, there are two other individuals who need citations. I suggest finding sources for Mary Mellor and her books Breaking the Boundaries and Feminisnm and Ecology. I would also suggest finding sources for Laura Wright.