User:Idelmund/Mask refusal/If you ain't runnin' game, Say my name Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Idelmund


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Idelmund/Mask_refusal?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mask refusal

Evaluate the drafted changes
Article is very clear and easy to understand. The beginning sentence lets me know exactly what I should expect from this section. Tone is also neutral throughout the whole section, there is no sense of the author of being for or against any kind of mask mandate only that this is what we have now. All sources would fall Wikipedia's Notability requirements as reliable and independent sources. Though, your number 2 and 4 references are the same or at least they send me to the same page. Other than that its a good article and I enjoyed reading it.