User:Idelmund/Mask refusal/Rebraun17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Isreal Del Mundo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Idelmund/Mask_refusal?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mask refusal

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead for this article fits well w/ students topic.

Content: interesting, relevant, and time-sensitive. It gives a modern look at mask wearing with a historical perspective.

Tone: Great job staying neutral! Mask wearing can be a hot button issue but you use historical approaches, supreme court decisions, and cite authority. I would maybe cite the CDC where they state the benefits of mask wearing after the sentence that talks about the executive branch having he ability to implement policy for public health and saftey.

Sources and Organization: looks great!