User:If you ain't runnin' game, Say my name/Abortion in Mexico/Ihopper Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

If you ain't runnin' game, Say my name


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:If%20you%20ain't%20runnin'%20game,%20Say%20my%20name/Abortion_in_Mexico?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:If%20you%20ain't%20runnin'%20game,%20Say%20my%20name/Abortion_in_Mexico?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead in section is concise but frames the topic of the article well. The content of the article is neutral and the tone is very balanced. Additionally, the link to the other article works well. Overall, the structure of the article is strong, and the article was easy to read without any grammatical errors. The sentence that uses a parenthetical could potentially be re-worked to include the information in the sentence without the use of parentheses. However, in general the article was well-written. In terms of content, it may be helpful to your reader to provide more context as to how abortion rights have been limited in Mexico, in order to explain the work of CEDAW. The sources are current,  appear to come from a diverse spectrum of authors, and accurately represent the propositions for which they were cited. Overall, a very good job!