User:If you ain't runnin' game, Say my name/Abortion in Mexico/Modrake21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

If you ain't runnin' game, Say my name


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:If%20you%20ain't%20runnin'%20game,%20Say%20my%20name/Abortion_in_Mexico?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Abortion in Mexico

Evaluate the drafted changes
Yay CEDAW! Great sources. Links work. No spelling errors or typos. I would add a comma after "Mexico is a party to CEDAW" in the second paragraph. Clear explanation on CEDAW's stance on abortion and its applicability to the issue addressed in the main article. Additions add substance and useful context to the article. Easy to read, good organization. Writing is neutral and informative. Nothing seems out of date. Good job!