User:If you ain't runnin' game, Say my name/Abortion in Mexico/Mosadzi1 Peer Review

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If you ain't runnin' game, Say my name


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 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:If%20you%20ain't%20runnin'%20game,%20Say%20my%20name/Abortion_in_Mexico?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
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Very cool topic! I think it is very well-organized, concise, and readable. There are no spelling or grammatical errors. I forgot to do this as well but you could divide up the sections to include a introduction/Lead, with an overview of the section. All of your sources are easy to access and I think they meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements as reliable and independent sources. As a suggestion, for the last sentence you can also cite to the CEDAW Committee's General Recommendations and Concluding Observations. I know the assignment was to keep things brief but now I'm really curious as to what kind of restrictions exist on abortion in Mexico, would be cool to add a sentence on that as well! To meet the Wikipedia "equity gap" goal, you can also add an sentence maybe on the impact of the restrictions on rural or indigenous women. Great job!