User:Ifrenette/Elacatinus puncticulatus/Mikehuang99 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ifrenette


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ifrenette/Elacatinus puncticulatus
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Elacatinus puncticulatus

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, nice detail and breadth of topics covered for your species. I like how the tone is neutral and the content is well-balanced. I would suggest expanding on your lead section to include more key characteristics of the species, such as ectoparasitism and coloration, to cover more of the major sections in your article. I think it might also be helpful to be a bit more specific on the types of clients commonly host for Elascatinus puncticulatus and species they prey on when not involved in symbiotic feeding. In the 'Ecology' section, you can mention how E. puncticulatus are often left unharmed by their clients if they do decide to cheat, which probably explains why this behavior persists (unlike in the Indo-Pacific cleaner wrasse). If there is available information, you could explain why many of the eggs do not survive if the male cleans them prior to hatching. The images are clear, helpful, and laid out nicely but I think it would be beneficial if you can find an image of the different tooth morphologies for E. puncticulatus to help the reader visualize why there is intra-specific variation in feeding patterns. Good job with extracting information/content from a variety of sources, just make sure your third reference has a clickable link to it. Good work!