User:Ifrenette/Elacatinus puncticulatus/Reidtosa Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Phnatko, Ifrenette


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ifrenette/Elacatinus puncticulatus


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Elacatinus puncticulatus

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi again,

This is just a direct transcription of what I wrote on your talk page, so not much is new. I implemented all of the small comments/edits I suggested below on the sandbox but they have already been implemented already. One small new note on the live page is, in the sentence "This species occurs at depths ranging from the 1 to 21m," (lead section) I would just drop the "the" and add "1 to 21m below the surface." Again, nice work.

"The page looks really good--it reads well and there's a ton of information that I'm sure wasn't there before. Because of that, I only have nit-picky feedback to give you. Most of these are grammatical: (1. It looks like there might be an extra word in the second sentence of your lead section (just drop the "of" or "from"). (2. I would change "they'll" to "they will" in the second paragraph of "Growth and Reproduction" just to stay consistent. (3. Again, these comments are all super specific little things, but there's an unitalicized "E" in the first paragraph of your "Growth and Reproduction" section: "Male E. puncticulatus clean the dead eggs after hatching..." (4. Add a space in "E.puncticulatus" in this sentence: "Elacatinus as a genus typically displays a terminal mouth position that corresponds to their roles as cleaner fish, but E.puncticulatus specifically display a heterodont dentition as well, meaning they have more than one type of tooth morphology" (p.2 of "Description"). (5. Finally, most wiki articles I see place the citations after the period of a sentence. Everything else looks great! Thanks for your feedback, too!"