User:Ig510/Sex verification in sports/Mcox19 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username)
 * Ig510
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * User:Ig510/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * there's no real lead, it's just the addition of diagrams
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * yes
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * no i think the images will be very helpful
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?
 * yes, it is providing information about intersex individuals who are an underrepresented group.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * you are using like one specific person's interpretation of sex development but i think it's established enough to just be fact
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * no
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * no, it's just providing a diagram to clarify the text

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * do you have an actual source for the slide images, can you get it from stacey?
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * Are the sources current?
 * from the 20th century but regarded as true and immutable
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
 * i mean jost is a white man
 * Check a few links. Do they work?
 * currently there are no links

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * i don't think you've added any new writing?
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * nope ^-^
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
 * yea

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * yes!!
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * oh you do need to add captions, that'll be the writing you add
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * ? you will have to make sure
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
 * they will be

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * yes!! the diagrams will make the concepts in the article much easier to understand for visual learners
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * very clear diagrams, good representation of the concepts
 * How can the content added be improved?
 * add the captions!! I think once you add the captions your addition will be perfect.