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"Prep for peer review"
The article I plan to contribute to is (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sex_verification_in_sports)

This article talks about the proses of sex verification for athletes and brings up the humiliation that athletes suffer when they are put to the test. To start off the articles talks about sex verification then throughout the article it goes into depth about the test and examples of people who have been tested. The lead seems to give a good intro to the article and presents what the article will be about. This article is well organized and is divided by sub headings for a different topic. I think the sections are put together well and the article has a good flow. Over all there are some sections that are longer than the others but the short sections seem to be same lengths and the longer sections also seem to be of similar lengths. This article contains a lot of sources and links most of them seem reliable as it a peers to be more background knowledge for this article.

My plans for contribution of this article is to add visuals to the section about SRY and where ever else they maybe prove to be non, this is a good article but most of the visuals are mostly pictures of athletes and not the scientific aspects of what they are talking about which is probably more complicated to understand that the athletes situations.

"Section being edited"
"Variations in pairings of inherited chromosome, other genetic aspects, and pre- and postnatal physical development at subcellular to organ levels mean some people are not unambiguously female or male. Fetuses start out as undifferentiated, then the SRY gene ( which is usually—but not always—located on the Y chromosome) turns on a variety of hormones that differentiate by the time of birth the newborn as a male baby." (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sex_verification_in_sports)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Screen_Shot_2020-12-03_at_10.05.08_PM.png Kashimada, Kenichi, and Peter Koopman. “Sry: the Master Switch in Mammalian Sex Determination.” Development, Oxford University Press for The Company of Biologists Limited, 1 Dec. 2010, dev.biologists.org/content/137/23/3921.

(I have an Idea of what diagram I want to add I just need to find the actual image) (Im planing on using the diagram about Jost's Principle on slide 3 from oct 15th lecture)

"Women with higher levels of androgen (particularly testosterone) are often considered to have a competitive advantage over other women since women statistically have lower levels than men. This difference in androgen levels is the reason many sports requiring athletes compete only among their own sex. However, others argue that expecting women athletes with naturally higher levels of testosterone to lower these levels by medical/pharmaceutical methods completely contradicts the purpose of doping regulations, which require athletes not take any substances that their bodies do not generate naturally." (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sex_verification_in_sports)

(For this section I was considering used the diagrams on the same lecture but slide number two about the going from from genes to gonads to anatomy)