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Dungog, New South Wales

The first original page detailing the topic of the Australian town, Dungog, consisted of three lines that broadly identifies the town's location within New South Wales state and the industries to which it is associated with (including agriculture, mining, and transport).

If I had the opportunity to create the first shared-information page on the topic, I would have included additional information surrounding the local schools and community benefits within the town. Information that Dungog High School is located in Dungog is significant, as is the local purpose-built cinema. I would also have included information on the historical buildings that reside in Dungog, including the hospital

If I had been the second reader, I would have corrected the article to state the ‘Hunter Valley Region’, rather than simply the ‘Hunter Valley’. The Hunter Valley is inclusive of multiple towns spanning a large geographical space and is, therefore, more accurately understood as a region.