User:Ihopper/COVID and Lease Agreements/Shawn Sullivan Depaul Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ihopper


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ihopper/COVID_and_Lease_Agreements?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall I think this was a great start to an article. I had a few suggestions below, but generally I thought the article was well developed.

Lead:

The lead sentence is perfect for explaining what the rest of the article is about.

Content:

The content is very good and detailed. I might suggest explaining what some of the more legal terms mean generally, but other than that this was very informative.

Tone and Balance:

The tone was very neutral and perfect for a Wiki article.

Organization suggestions:

Overall I thought the organization and flow of the article worked well. The flow of one topic to the next made sense and I would keep it just the way it is. One suggestion I had would be to add a brief explanation of what a Force Majeure clause is so a reader who has no legal background can understand what that clause is. (I agree this is something that would strengthen the article).

Cites:

The articles were all very on point for the topic. Additionally, you met the criteria for a new Nice job!