User:Iiiiris295/sandbox

Yes, I would say that the group’s edits have improved the article. As a reader, I really appreciate the image that the group added, which helps the readers to visualize what an anal plug looks like. This section definitely achieved the group’s goal to include information about how and when to use PrEP, and the language used was appropriate and easy to understand. They were also careful to not use medical language and did not refer to those taking PrEP as “patients,” which was appropriate. I appreciated the section “Availability and Pricing in the United States,” although I thought that the information added to this section aligned more with your goal for the “Politics and Culture” section, but you got the information into the article and it is definitely a valuable addition. I cannot see any evidence of plagiarism, and the group has included appropriate citations and references throughout the new additions to their article