User:Iitzlrod/José Luis Neyra/Seongyeon Song Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Username: Iitzlrod


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * José Luis Neyra


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * José Luis Neyra

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I read this article and thought it had a really good starting point. Explaining the life of Jose Luis Neyra, the subject of the article, and when he started his work and what collections he has is a great start. I think attaching a photo is also helpful for those who search for and read this article. Also, by including the reference, I think it's a reliable source. I would say it would be good to add more contents, and I hope there's a part that explains his work by choosing some of his collections in the biography section. It would also be nice to talk about what philosophy or values he had in his work and how they were reflected in it. Finally, I'd like you to focus on what kind of social and cultural impact or influence his work has had.